I’m attaching two documents here for your reference while you work on your outlines for class tomorrow.
One is the student sample essay that’s also included on the Project 1 page. I have annotated the introduction so you can see how the student includes all of the ideas presented in the P1 suggested outline sections I and II, but in a slightly different order. You’ll need to think about how best to present that material, whether it should go in one or two paragraphs, etc.
student-sample-rhetorical-analysis-1 annotated
The other is an outline for Project 1 written by one of my online students, and it includes my feedback to her. She has been gracious enough to let me share it with you. This is a fairly well-developed outline, and though there are some areas she needs to keep thinking about (as you’ll see in the notes), she’s well-positioned to move from her outline to a draft of her essay.
We can talk further about these documents on Thursday if it’s helpful.
